" why he never talked,
all this time
- in laughter -
- or in cries. -"
May be he just waits.
Silently
for his season.
For I had seen 'spring' in those eyes.
And I had seen
'spring'
- swimming -
- brimming -
- coming -
in those crystalline eyes.
Photography- One of my garden clicks.
I had been spring...
ReplyDeleteThe past tense lends a poignancy to these lines.
thanks Kerry. :)
DeleteThere is a story here behind these lines, so poignantly written.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteYes there is. There always is.
Yeah, this is awesome. Especially the second stanza. Really, I love this. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
DeleteNicely, and musically, said.
ReplyDeletenice mam..
ReplyDeletecan u please suggest..Cn i start prep for UPSC? i have only two attempts..gen cat..working as a TA in CBEC deptt..waiting for your reply
beautifully explained..
ReplyDeletemam can u please tell me what stream i should take after 10th ....at present i am in in class 10 only...i am very preasurerise towards my parents....to take science but i want to be ias officer as u ....please suggest me mam....
Maám as far as i can infer, are you a follower of santmat?
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