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Thursday, November 4, 2010

The Five Elements

I shall wait for the rest of my life.
For the moment.
When.
The five elements I am made with.
Shall merge with Yours.

The Air.
The Fire.
The Water.
The Earth
And.
The Sky.
Shall witness. Our Unison.

13 comments:

  1. A lovely definition of Unison.. Genius..

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  2. A girls fascination, oftens runs wild into dominions uninhibited...beautiful Gazal.

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  3. @Anshul: This is no fascination Sir....
    THIS IS......
    :)

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  4. oops.. i think i have already read nd commented on this post...but i can't find that nw... anywayz.... very thoughtful approach .. nice lines..
    happy diwali to u nd ur family.....

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  5. What a beautiful unison of words and your vision of all the elements becoming one. Thank you for your visit. I enjoyed your writing. Take Care!

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  6. truly brilliant..
    keep writing...........all the best

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  7. Best wishes on deepawali................

    regards
    SANJAY

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  8. oh wow...dats heartfelt n so thoughtful!

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  9. my my I'll wait for that moment too ;) hahah
    BTW pantnagar?? what are you doing there???

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  10. @rainboy
    Yupp Pantnagar... I'm doin btech.... thought thats not the only thing that I do..
    :)

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  11. So beautiful, to be one wit hour creator, devotionally flowing, complete surrender.............

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