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Wednesday, June 3, 2015

When the earth became a star..

A dark coffee with You, that snowy dawn.
The child in me was still unaware,
that the earth was not witnessing just another polarity reversal,
when the north becomes south, and the south becomes north.

The north had collided with the south;
as your breath touched my forehead, and stayed there, frozen in time.
The élan blinded all those on other planets.
They thought, the Earth had become a star.

15 comments:

  1. That would be some great kiss, I guess! Nice poem!

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  2. This is just beautiful.

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  3. What a beautiful poem Gazal..Yes, in that moment Earth couldn't help but quietly become a star.. You have created magic.. Keep it up!! I am here after a long time,,,Thanks to Leo, old friends will meet again..

    RS

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  4. i always thought it was more complicated a process than this :)

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    1. well Deeps, when we try to simplify the complicated, the simple gets complicated. I was simple. I am becoming complicated.
      keep talking..

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    2. your comment inspired me for a new verse. thanks:)

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    1. yes romantic. simple. and yet complicated.

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  6. Quite interesting, where the prompt took you :) Nice.

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    1. Wordles are a quaint species. they just dig us out...

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