A dark coffee with You, that snowy dawn.
The child in me was still unaware,
that the earth was not witnessing just another polarity reversal,
when the north becomes south, and the south becomes north.
The north had collided with the south;
as your breath touched my forehead, and stayed there, frozen in time.
The élan blinded all those on other planets.
They thought, the Earth had become a star.
The child in me was still unaware,
that the earth was not witnessing just another polarity reversal,
when the north becomes south, and the south becomes north.
The north had collided with the south;
as your breath touched my forehead, and stayed there, frozen in time.
The élan blinded all those on other planets.
They thought, the Earth had become a star.
That would be some great kiss, I guess! Nice poem!
ReplyDeletethank u.
DeleteThis is just beautiful.
ReplyDeletethanks..
DeleteWhat a beautiful poem Gazal..Yes, in that moment Earth couldn't help but quietly become a star.. You have created magic.. Keep it up!! I am here after a long time,,,Thanks to Leo, old friends will meet again..
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Thank you sir. keep interacting.
Deletei always thought it was more complicated a process than this :)
ReplyDeletewell Deeps, when we try to simplify the complicated, the simple gets complicated. I was simple. I am becoming complicated.
Deletekeep talking..
your comment inspired me for a new verse. thanks:)
Deletejust so romantic, what a moment!
ReplyDeleteyes romantic. simple. and yet complicated.
DeleteQuite interesting, where the prompt took you :) Nice.
ReplyDeleteWordles are a quaint species. they just dig us out...
Deletelove the romantic spin!
ReplyDeleteThanks moonie:) keep talking.
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