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Tuesday, May 19, 2015

The paradox

  
You were a soliloquy.
I was the abode.
One day You found Me.

I would tell you.
Do you remember?
I would tell you.
the best thing which happened to me was that
'You found Me.'

The paradox.
Today you have a home.
Your abode.
And I become,
The soliloquy.

11 comments:

  1. What a beauty i nthis poem, one becoming the other.

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  2. @vandana thanks vandana. becoming the other... yes. not that simple though.

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  3. it's a beautiful piece. I guess everything that comes leaves something behind and we're forever changed.

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  4. i am the vine you are the branches...both of which cant be separated

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    1. time is powerful. it changes everything. day by day nothing seems to change, and soon everything changes...

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    2. but life is like that, some changes, they must happen, thus we learn the 'yes' n 'no' of life

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  5. Beautiful. Thank you for your comment. That was beautiful as well.

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  6. Well crafted poem with deep meaning. I always thought that when soliloquy finds the abode both will happily for ever.

    Best wishes

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    1. thank you sir. visited ur blog. found it interesting. keep writing.

      and yes, even i thought that when the soliloquy found the abode, they would live happily ever after. those were the dreams it gave me. but i was wrong. may be the abode could not give the soliloquy what it wanted, or what could complete it. so when it left the abode, the abode, became the soliloquy...

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    2. Fabulous thoughts and very logical

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