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Yes its sinking in.. Rank 40, CSE 2015.The UPSC circle- the close and the beginning.

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Monday, May 23, 2016

The dawn is within.

पहाड़ों की हर इक सुबह को मगर मैं 
समेटे हूँ खुद में। 
है खोया बहुत कुछ जहाँ में, फिर इक दिन 
मिला सब वो मुझ में। 

तू जाने जिसे है खुदा से भी ज़्यादा 
वो एहसास क्या है ?
तू गर दूर खुद से यूँ होने लगेगा,
तो फिर पास क्या है ?
photograph: clicked by me @Tattapani, Himachal

9 comments:

  1. madam i landed here searching for fodder for essays after going through your strategy on esays but unable to find where they are..please help me to find out
    Thanking You and CONGRATULATIONS

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    1. I did not write proper essays, just compiled some material and tried to form a structure theme-wise on what i thot to be important. The most structured plan was for terrorism related essay, so i shared that one online. its not a proper essay, just points which i wud hav explored had anything related to it come in the ppr.
      best wishes.

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  2. This is so beautiful. I wish you will record this in soundcloud and share the link here. It will be even more wonderful to hear you read.

    Thank you for your continued encouragement G.

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  3. Thank you R.
    :)
    great idea. will do that as i get free.

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  4. Hi Gazal Bharadwaj mam, please clarify on these essay problems:
    1. Generally in writing an essay do we need to write their pros and cons for all kinds of topics?
    2, Also, in topic like, " It is not inequality which is the real misfortune, it is dependence", do we need to go/write in tune with the statement i.e, by giving all possible positive points on 'dependence', and writing all negative points on 'inequality' or can we also write by giving positive points to 'inequality' and negative points to 'dependence'? Mam, please kindly take time in replying to these queries as soon as you receive it. Please reply...

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  5. 1. yes. bec essay needs analysis and that involves pros and cons.
    2. Take a stand and defend it. You may highlight some negatives but make sure your essay represents your stand in such topics. eg. you wud agree dependence is real misfortune, but may explore a linkage like inequality giving rise to dependence etc
    best wishes

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  6. On every mountain........ There is a miracle ......

    Beautifully written mam.....
    Pic also covers serene beauty of nature......here in MP also der is tatapani actually its waterfall located in Indore....

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